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 Today in class, we learned more in dept about how to construct a compare and contrast essay. My classmates and I were able to give our feedback. Although some students were a bit unsure about what they were doing, they were able to understand. As for myself, I had a bit of difficulty developing my essay in terms of vocabulary but I think I did a good job.

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